too many sporadic musical ideas none of which are realized. Piano volume is too high, instruments generally not mixed well. Seems like it was rushed. Keep tryin!

Seems like a good lofi track! Seems to have potential if more instruments were added in sooner and a different change would possibly make this feel a bit more fleshed out. Drums volume seem a bit high in my opinion. A few more hours spent on this track would really see some payoff!

Great creation of sounds and waveforms! Very chaotic while maintaining structure is very enjoyable to the ears! More structure I feel would make this song really feel like an epic. Lot of potential, audio levels could be edited in my opinion. Certain sounds seem a bit louder that take away from the other instruments. Maybe some remastering would help.